Train Station Atmosphere Description

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The cold freezing air hitting my face like a slap I stood there waiting for the train to come counting every second. People clumped together all around me like a chickens in a coop. Suddenly I smell a strong overpowering cologne I turn around and I saw a 6 ft man looking dead serious not blinking standing there still   almost like he was being controlled like a suffer Dressed in full black wearing his face being covered with a black hat wrapped all around his head like a snake only a tiny bit of his lips and cheeks showing his skin more whiter then paper his lips red almost like he rubbed gallons of ballons of blood on them felt a strange feeling almost like the atmosphere was me about something but what could it be What grade would this get me in a real gcse